2. Reflection
Most of the comments I received on my last elevator pitch were very positive.
Except for one comment, which said the following,
Hey Kevin, I really like your idea but I think that because this was your first time doing this elevator pitch you could work on the confidence and delivery a little bit.
At first I was taken aback. Why did he say that? Was he in a bad mood? Was he one of the few that deviated from the normal ENT comments that consist of "wow, great idea, I totally agree, you are awesome"? Was he pulling my leg?
I watched the video again and I just wrote off his comment. It made me laugh, and also think a bit.
3. What did I change?
Nada, I'll block out my haters.
Kevin,
ReplyDeleteI agree you should block out the haters. This park sounds like a really interesting idea and the market in Gainesville definitely exists. I would keep at this idea and continue to develop it into a real plan of action. If you would like to read my blog, please go to: http://mitchallenent3003.blogspot.com/
Thanks,
Mitch
Hey Kevin,
ReplyDeleteOut of all the new ideas that I have come across in this class to comment on, I think that yours is the best. If only you could actually create this park because it sounds amazing! Students need a little break from school and studying, where they can feel stress-free and young again. Your elevator pitch was awesome and you captured my attention from the start. Really cool background too. If you want to check out my third attempt at my elevator pitch, here is the link:
http://andreacdona.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html